Trip CN Tower

1. The first paragraph answers the W-H questions: Who, when, why, how much, etc.

before

• I didn't join in CN tower because I had a doctor appointment, but my classmates went to CN Tower yesterday. I asked about CN Tower with Venkata. She told me about her trip.

• Venkata went to CN Tower. She left house at 8:30 with her husband. Her husband dropped off at CN Tower, and she arrived there at 9:40 a.m then she waited to friends for one hour,  after that, she was worried about friends, where are they? finally she saw friends and teacher, she felt more comfortable. They went inside near the counter. She gave a ticket but they did't accept. They said your ticket aren't correct because they didn't find her ticket in online, and Joseph feel disappointed. Joseph apologized with students. Joseph gave better idea for students for Harbour-front HTO park, so some student went with her and she enjoyed. She took pictures, and she came back home at 1:30pm

After

• I didn'tgo to CN Tower because I had a doctor's appointment, but my classmates went to CN Tower yesterday. I asked Venkata about CN Tower.

Venkata left her house at 8:30a.m with her husband. His dropped her off at CN Tower at 9:40 a.m. Then she waited for friends for one hour. After that, she was worried about friends because they were late. Finally she saw friends and teacher. She felt more comfortable. They went inside near the counter. She gave her ticket but they didn't accept it. They said her ticket wasn't correct because they didn't find her ticket in online, and Joseph felt disappointed. Joseph apologized to the students. He suggested going to for Harbour-front HTO park, so some students went together she enjoyed. She took pictures, and arrived back home at 1:30 pm.